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It takes one hand to touch another,
it takes one heart to care,
we must be skeletons, bleached and bare
For we won't help our brother.


It takes one hug to soothe a sore
It takes one mouth to speak
we must be mute and very weak
for we don't comfort anymore.

It takes one kiss to reassure
It takes one word to meet a stranger
we must be very selfish men
for we don't love each other.

It takes a moment to forgive
It takes so little to hate
we must be very angry people
for we have all made mistakes

It takes a child to make an adult
It takes a parent to nurture
we must be quite close-minded fools
to simply kill our future.
:iconlucia672:
Think about it....
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:iconrlkirkland:
*rlkirkland Apr 23, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
"Think about it.... "
Art has always a voice for needs.
Thank You :heart:
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~Lucia672 Apr 23, 2010  Student General Artist
you're welcome
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:iconarchangelaki:
Nice flow. Your point comes across clearly as well. Very good job overall
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~Lucia672 Apr 23, 2010  Student General Artist
thank you.
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:iconarchangelaki:
you're welcome
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~Shyeloh Apr 17, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
This is so sadly true. :( This is a beautiful poem. I love the rhythem and rhyme, and every single stanza is wonderful :heart:
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~Lucia672 Apr 17, 2010  Student General Artist
thank you :hug:
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~IamNOTalone Apr 16, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice. I wish it wasn't so true, but it is. Oh it is.
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~Lucia672 Apr 16, 2010  Student General Artist
thank you.
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~IamNOTalone Apr 16, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome!
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